You gaze at me like a pointed gun,
I never waged war against a paisan,
Thy eyes swallowed me like a drop of water-
Caging the full moon on its kisser;
I am imprisoned inside your pupils-
without breaking the eyelids.
Don’t ever accuse me for tormenting,
Your heart and soul.
O, My angel I feel secured,
You not jailed me though,
To save me from dust and ash,
I feel warmth of love, and tears,
Feeling dual love in my life, when
You birthed me two times in your eyes.
Lovely one
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thank you gb
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Welcome alien
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Ty
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💙🙏
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🙂 do you understand English?
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Yes and i love english Very much
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Grande….
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Bravo!
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Amazing!
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Thanks dude…
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Reblogged this on Pencliff.
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Eyes can convey more emotions and communication than even words some times. Considering this fact I would say you have found have found your dwelling place….be rest assured you will remain forever there….
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haha great 😛
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Amazingly beautiful!!
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Thanks Kranti..this is beautiful like her eyes..:)
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😊
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Wow wonderful words. Especially the line ‘ I am imprisoned inside your pupils’ is awesome. I believe that eyes not only shows you the world, it makes world understand what you are and your emotions are. These lines are impressive.
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Thanks my friend….glad u liked it
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this is so beautiful!forever a fan of your written work!
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Thanks Nik…Pleasure being connected wit u….and yea..hows gng ur school and blogging…
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Beautifully expressed
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Thanks Dear…hopefully u enjoyed..
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Fantastic and amazing poem. Just short and straight forward.
You are a phenomenal person with such incredible poem.
Am so glad that I had to comment on it.
I hope you have a wonderful and relaxing Sunday.
#PATRICKSTORIES
Peace ✌and Love ❤
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you are most welcome and happy weekend to you!
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Thank you! I appreciate your thoughtful response.
Such an awesome way of replying someone. Thanks. Again
As always your posts are incredible and I enjoying reading every word down till the last line. I must say that you are probably one of the excellent bloggers on WordPress that write inspired
Writing/post
Also, I just posted:
IN HONOUR OF WOMEN.
Would love to know your views. Love to see your contributions on it. I’m always excited for your comment. 🙂
You are welcome
#PATRICKSTORIES
Peace ✌and Love ❤
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sure i will
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You are welcome
I still remain the simple blogger…..
#PATRICKSTORIES
Peace ✌and Love ❤
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Thanks for accepting and following my blog.
I’m available to read your post at my convenient time.
You have such an interesting topic I will love to read in
your blog.
I still remain the simple blogger…..
#PATRICKSTORIES
Peace ✌and Love ❤
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thanks a lot my friend!!
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You are welcome
I still remain the simple blogger…..
#PATRICKSTORIES
Peace ✌and Love ❤
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Oh, love is just magic!
❤
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yea magic and dont know how it disappears in time haha
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Yeah, so true!
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🙂 haha yes,,thanks for stopping by
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Always!
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Beautiful!😊
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Thanks for reading it
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