Know what she hath


The gleaming eyes of the Sun,

The glooming cheeks of the Moon,

The glittering red planet lips,

The feathery feet of Mercury,

The Aphrodite heart of Venus,

The jealous planet of Jupiter below waist,

The sadist Saturn on her chest,

The bluish Uranus on the eyebrows,

The nerves of  the Neptune in front,

Invisible to the naked eyes.

She is space and an angel,

She came like savior and lover,

She is truthful and living,

Yes, She is living on the Earth!

19 thoughts on “Know what she hath

    1. thanks.. I can write a lot like this… but nobody want to read it.. the longer it goes.. the quick they change the page.. so want to keep as a sonnet or a haiku… but planning to write a long ..may be a lyric..:)

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      1. You are spot on regarding length and the reader’s attention span. But I think this one – though longer – still is quite digestible. —–Chagall


      2. Yes, it is very romantic I would say.. I love to write a girl.. and her look..


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