Coitus

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You in me,

Me in you,

We lost us.

31 thoughts on “Coitus

      1. Haha πŸ™‚ Now understood πŸ˜› very clever you are..I was just thinking something else πŸ˜› haha πŸ™‚ It’s clear now.. small words can express more πŸ™‚

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    1. Does it make a different meaning? πŸ™‚ I think ourselves also looks fine. I’m sure both make different meanings, can you explain your understanding with these two words in this poem ? πŸ™‚

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      1. πŸ™‚ just kiddin’, of course… have a great afternoon and thanx/xiΓ©-xiΓ© for stopping by my crossroads… my very best and cheers! πŸ™‚

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      2. Haha. I would have been more glad if you had answered me..We lost us/We lost ourselves – the difference in understanding πŸ™‚ I really would like to comment and talk about playing with words πŸ™‚

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      3. if you’ve read some of my posts, you’ve realized I’m a “word player”… πŸ™‚ there’s a slight difference between “us” and “ourselves”… “us”=we(pronoun) while “ourselves” implies our whole being: body and mind… πŸ™‚ P.S. my posts about “words” – if you have some spare time: πŸ™‚
        http://myvirtualplayground.wordpress.com/?s=words

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      4. Oh nice, thanks for the comment. Really I appreciate that, so in fact ourselves would be fine here, because I meant that only πŸ™‚

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  1. It happens this way sometimes. It has to be the right combinations of souls to maintain and support each individual, as well as the entity of the unit.
    I am still looking…sigh..I end up with the guys that want me to be part of them and lose my own identity…Without each individual existing independently, the oneness of the couple is lost, because there is only the more dominant demanding one that lives…
    Annie

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