Waiting for My Valentina

Note: I wrote in my dream and penned on the phone on the way and posted from the office !

The foot path we left,
In the sea-shore, on the sands

The breath, we left,
In the spring, on the breeze

The kisses we shared,
On the beaches, on the sun loungers

The love we planted,
In the parks, In the gardens

The words we talked,
On the flights, on the air

The fights we had,
In the trains, In the buses

The lust we shared,
In the nights, on the bed

The quarrels we had,
At the hotels, on the restaurants

The days we had,
Been together, being hugged

The dream we had,
For today, for tomorrow

The day we planned,
For honeymoon, for appetite

The eyes you liked,
Every moment, every second

The lips you kissed,
In the morning, in the evening

All been left alone,
And they are asking,
Why did you leave me alone?

I hold my tears,
Dear, I tell them,
I hate you!

I hate you,
You are not sinned,
I hate you,
You are good to them,

I hate you,
You are mine,
I hate you,
I don’t want to hurt you,

I wait and tell them,
We will be back again.

25 thoughts on “Waiting for My Valentina

      1. Oh I don’t have your luck! But… Three single girls partied at home! 😉 How do you think it would have been? It was a breather after long!

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      2. Me too, we singles mingled 🙂 it was a wonderful with our own cooked food 🙂 and a movie 🙂 and today we continued with the great match 🙂 so think of now.. The reason for the poem 🙂

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      3. Yup exactly 🙂 hey by the way yesterday one of my new lovely friend overt took your position as second top commenter and now you surpassed her again 🙂 cheers dear..

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      4. No Don’t be 🙂 I won’t let you down..:) there is no dislike button to dislike your comment 🙂


  1. I don’t need to celebrate “commercial days” like Feb 14th, but I do celebrate true LOVE – every day… 🙂 aloha and have a great week, Iku2e! cheers, Me’lani 🙂

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    1. Haha..,, “commercial days “nice words 🙂 that’s so sweet and wish you a happy day everyday 🙂 cheers 🙂


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