Upon a stranger smile,
Tender feet kissed mother,
A girl’s glance everyday,
Father’s care of daughter,
Unknown follower’s unexpected appreciations,
Employer who cares you,
Unlimited unexpected uncontrollable heart,
A guy’s only expectation,
Undefined value in soul,
Carried in coming births.
Love is indeed all of the above π
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thank you! π
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Really good.. I loved that unknown follower line
Keep up the good work!
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Hey thanks fur you, I forgot to comment on yours,, just I got time now.. I hope you won’t mind of being delayed
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No, didn’t mind at all.
Its enough that you completed the challenge and responded back π
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Thanks π are you a student?
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actually a trainee.:p
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Oh π good nice
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beautiful poem π
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Thank you dr friend π
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Lovely dear…I agree with Ameena, Love is indeed what you said in your poetry π And thank you for accepting the challenge π
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Thank you my friend, my pleasure and I just saw your poem and my name, so just wanted to write it down, still I can go on.. But rule is ten lines π
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Sorry for the rule, however, rule is rule π
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It’s OK π
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Wow! You have a way with words! I can’t seem to do this. Joining few words to make so much sense!!! π
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Thank you Ms/ Mrs Regular π
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I missed employer in mine! Good one π
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Oh, finally the teacher gave me marks π
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Don’t embarrass me!
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Hey, no π I am just kidding.Unfortunately you have been pushed to 4th position from top commenter π I said teacher because someone review my work properly π and you deserve to be called so π
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Oh! I need to buck up!
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I really happy to write now..I get more and more comments everyday…new people are topping my commenter list..and I am counting all of them,..they need a free hug π but still you are in the list …:P
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And thank you π
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Too much in too less !!!! π
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π
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Keep writing..!! π
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thank you , sure I will π Thanks for the support buddy!
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My pleasure mate π
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What a lovely concept. Thank you for sharing. π
Ta Ta for now, Cathy the Bagg Lady
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Thank you π
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beautiful words!
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thanks
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